It was pretty good. My favorite part, hands down, is how you set up the story in the beginning. The way you made it seem as if some "evil corporation" moved in and was doing horrible things to people, and then rapidly changed sympathy by showing that the people they're doing those horrible things to are the sinister EOD. I think that was absolutely genius!!!!
Wow, Thanks man. It's been a long while in the making and while there still are some holes in the story (that I might address after the complete first pass) I am most concerned with just getting it done.
It's a lot of fun weaving the story together and setting up the twists and turns. I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks again